let me know what do u think!! https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/hold-me

let me know what do u think!! https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/hold-me

Fantastic arrangement man, this is great stuff!  To second the poster above me, adding a sub bass layer will definitely help and make it sound more "filled".  I like to use sine waves in a low octave for my sub layer.  Also, I think if you pan the layers so that they aren't all at 0 panning and throw in some stereo imaging to widen up the stereo on some of the layers it will sound more spread out and more like a wall of sound vs. a lot of layers playing on top of each other and competing for space.

I hope that helps man, cheers!

Heyo,

Firts off, nice progression. I like it. (I actually like what you have so far)

So first off, the first chords you play is way too dry. (at 0:06) Add some reverb to it, so it doesn't completely disappear. (It's not a bad idea to do such chords but it need to create atmosphere. So reverb, create a room effect.)

Then, you have 0 sub bass. You can hear it because the kick is the lowest thing played. It need a sub bass. It will give way more power to your drop. (Like 100% more)

The rest is fine. I guess. I like the overall.

thanks for the tip i'm trying to improve my mixes, i'll work hard on it!

This is super beautiful and atmospheric! <3 I agree with the other comments here. Definitely add some sub bass and maybe multiband dynamics to glue everything tightly together. Excited to see what you have for us in the future I think you have a lot of talent to build off of

yea, definetly it need some sub layers and more dynamism, i'll experiment with all the tips and see what i get, and yo thanks a lot it means so much for me, sometimes is so hard to continue and that kinda comments make me feel each day more confident, really appreciate it!!!