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First Track in the Works [DnB]
« on: June 08, 2016, 11:34:51 pm »
Hey guys, this is my first real song I've been able to put together after almost a year of trying. I would appreciate some feedback. Thanks.

I am considering having the drums come in right as the bass and such come in during the first chorus... any opinions?
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Re: First Track in the Works [DnB]
« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2016, 01:38:24 am »
It's solid, but something about the melody during the "chorus" is just not grabbing or memorable. It feels like it would make a good downsection instead and something more grabbing as the chorus/dropsection.

Just my opinion!

Besides that the sounds are good and fitting. I would also say the drum section could use some fills/changeups.
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Re: First Track in the Works [DnB]
« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2016, 03:39:34 am »
Quote from: Cor Sicarius on June 09, 2016, 01:38:24 am
It's solid, but something about the melody during the "chorus" is just not grabbing or memorable. It feels like it would make a good downsection instead and something more grabbing as the chorus/dropsection.

Just my opinion!

Besides that the sounds are good and fitting. I would also say the drum section could use some fills/changeups.
Thanks for the reply! I will try and diversify the drums, I was also feeling the same. I do also agree that the melody is a bit meh. The notes move too fast for the violin. Maybe I'll use a different synth for the melody during the second drop.
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