I'm just gonna make a list of things I come across in chronological order, so here we go:
- Your sub bass sounds like it's an octave too high
- The kick and snare don't really fit the vibe you're going for
- Transitions are somewhat abrupt
- I feel like some of the focal elements of this track are buried behind the vocals
- The reese bass you're using has a strange stereo element to it, I don't like how it sits around my right ear
- It wouldn't hurt to add some variation, this song sounds really repetitive atm
Good luck with your track!
