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Ocular & Dictate - Temple [NEUROTRAP]
« on: January 06, 2016, 07:41:00 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/ocularedm/ocular-dictate-temple-mastered/s-kua0D

Sorry, the track is private atm so I can't embed it here!
We've been working on this tune since January 2015, really hope you enjoy it as much as we do :D

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Re: Ocular & Dictate - Temple [NEUROTRAP]
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2016, 07:50:33 pm »
Insanely mixed, holy fuck.

Would love some more variation in this tho. It is a little repetitive at times.

Arrangement wise it could use some more work. Maybe add some more melody lines to it. That will play in the back and slowly evolve into something cool.

Great work tho man.

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Re: Ocular & Dictate - Temple [NEUROTRAP]
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2016, 07:50:50 pm »
Man, it's lit. I really like that toms and arps

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Re: Ocular & Dictate - Temple [NEUROTRAP]
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2016, 09:17:05 pm »
So many great elements in this song! Sounds sick.

I suggest adding a lil more high-end synth work though, and changing up that melody a little bit so it isn't so repetitive. Maybe add another melody too.

Sounds great so far. :)
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Re: Ocular & Dictate - Temple [NEUROTRAP]
« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2016, 09:21:22 pm »
I love this so much

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Re: Ocular & Dictate - Temple [NEUROTRAP]
« Reply #5 on: January 06, 2016, 11:15:05 pm »
Thanks guys! Unfortunately I can't work on it anymore cuz I no longer have the project file but I'm glad to see you like where we took it :)