All I have to say is this is very nicely laid out. The lows could be a bit more punchier in your "drop". You may want to look into a different sub sample because it's kind of bleeding into itself & maybe some tuning with it as well. It kind of has a hard time fitting in with the chorus. Everything else sounds great though, I would love to know how you're doing your vocal chops & how you're tuning them. Just work on those lows man and you're there.