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Future-Garage // Hybrid Trap original. Would <3 feedback! : ]
« on: May 27, 2016, 07:56:39 pm »
Hey folks,

working hard on this energetic Marshmellow and Wheathin inspired track.  I would adore feedback of any kind!

https://soundcloud.com/seafarer1/lungs-demo/s-gdVmc

Thank you
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« Last Edit: June 02, 2016, 06:52:10 pm by iamseafarer »
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Re: Future-Garage // Hybrid Trap original. Would <3 feedback! : ]
« Reply #1 on: May 29, 2016, 08:20:27 pm »
good news:
1. first part of the drop definitely sounds marshmello inspired
2. second part of the drop definitely sounds wheathin inspired
3. good sample choice
bad news:
1. for me the bass isn't really popping through the mix
2. for me the sub bass in the break doesn't really sit well in the mix
3. at some parts between the first and second drop the lead sounded a tad too bright

shoutout to KRNE in this track lol
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Re: Future-Garage // Hybrid Trap original. Would <3 feedback! : ]
« Reply #2 on: May 29, 2016, 08:40:17 pm »
Really like the synth you use at 1.20 - sounds like some Flume chords.
The transitions sound really great.
i'm loving the chord progressions
however i agree with yellow liar
Quote from: yellowliar on May 29, 2016, 08:20:27 pm
for me the bass isn't really popping through the mix
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Re: Future-Garage // Hybrid Trap original. Would <3 feedback! : ]
« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2016, 03:20:40 am »
Quote from: yellowliar on May 29, 2016, 08:20:27 pm
good news:
1. first part of the drop definitely sounds marshmello inspired
2. second part of the drop definitely sounds wheathin inspired
3. good sample choice
bad news:
1. for me the bass isn't really popping through the mix
2. for me the sub bass in the break doesn't really sit well in the mix
3. at some parts between the first and second drop the lead sounded a tad too bright

shoutout to KRNE in this track lol

Shoutout to KRNE?  I used a few of his samples from that pack lol, is that what you mean? 

Thanks dude, great feedback and I agree. 
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Re: Future-Garage // Hybrid Trap original. Would <3 feedback! : ]
« Reply #4 on: May 31, 2016, 12:25:07 am »
Quote from: iamseafarer on May 30, 2016, 03:20:40 am
Quote from: yellowliar on May 29, 2016, 08:20:27 pm
good news:
1. first part of the drop definitely sounds marshmello inspired
2. second part of the drop definitely sounds wheathin inspired
3. good sample choice
bad news:
1. for me the bass isn't really popping through the mix
2. for me the sub bass in the break doesn't really sit well in the mix
3. at some parts between the first and second drop the lead sounded a tad too bright

shoutout to KRNE in this track lol

Shoutout to KRNE?  I used a few of his samples from that pack lol, is that what you mean? 

Thanks dude, great feedback and I agree. 
hell yeah thats what I meant! KRNE is seriously one of my favorite artists.
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Re: Future-Garage // Hybrid Trap original. Would <3 feedback! : ]
« Reply #5 on: June 02, 2016, 06:51:40 pm »
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Re: Future-Garage // Hybrid Trap original. Would <3 feedback! : ]
« Reply #6 on: June 07, 2016, 04:39:37 pm »
I really like this, especially that second part in your breakdown. VERY mello inspired as someone noted. That intro is solid. Your lows are definitely coming out a lot better in the updated version. One thing I'd be careful with is those vocals becoming a little repetitive. Other than that, this is something I'd jam out on the way to work.
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« Reply #7 on: June 09, 2016, 01:41:12 am »
Solid composition. Sounds like alot of samples and presets were used though. Sound design isn't super original, but idk if that's what you were going for so w/e. Plus composition is far more important than sounds, so props.

I feel like the drums get lost in the mix quite a bit. Bus sidechaining will fix that. If you don't know how watch some tuts! It'll help a lot. Even I don't have it completely down so don't worry. xD Just tip.
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Re: Future-Garage // Hybrid Trap original. Would <3 feedback! : ]
« Reply #8 on: June 09, 2016, 05:27:02 pm »
This is really good man! i can totally dig to this.

great work on the synths, arrangement is spot on. i love the change in style for the second drop!

you gained a new follower with this man:)
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