Pros:
• cool bass patch in the drops
Cons:
• the impact noise at the beginning is cheesy. same thing can be said for the other risers. select quality samples that fit your track
• automate the initial synth (not the bass) so that it doesn't get too repetitive. It's really repetitive as it is
• the kick's release is too long and conflicts with the bass in the intro of the track, try to clip the kick's tail or pick a different kick
• learn proper sidechaining
• when your bass comes in it's often too loud and the rest of the track doesn't have enough room to breathe. this is where EQing can come in and clear up problem frequencies. on a side-note, the bass sounds too mono and could use a little stereo treatment. it would be nice for the bass to have more upper harmonics to cut through the mix a little more
