Allright ill be brutal.

I think this track is very boring. Like really boring. It is really generic.
Some random black dude saying random words, check.
Some hard sub base blasting the track, check
Detuned pad that is loud. Yup
 
Beatport no1 here we come right???

Now onto the positive stuff.
Ur mix is good. Low end could be better. But for the most part it is really solid. Better then mine anyway.
I loved the subtle use of the arp in your song. they come out ever so subtly but fit the track nice. I like it.
I think for the most part ur subtle use of small variation is really good. And that is really nice because that is what keeps the track from being repetitive.

In the end I didnt really like it. Production wise u did a good job. Hope u think any of this is usefull

cheers