I'll try and give some feedback. It's a badboy for sure...

I would have liked some more melody in this song coming from something other than the bass. Something to help "hold" the song together as a main idea. Mixing wise, it's not bad. The open hats seem a little too loud. There not much contrast between sections either. Some dynamic range would be nice.

Also, I can say your name if you want. By the way, you should give some feedback to some artists who haven't already gotten some advice on theirs, since you got some.

-Annie