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Staches

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Feedback will be really appreciated with this ID
« on: May 15, 2016, 06:33:11 am »
I just finished a preliminary version of this song, and before doing the intro/outro and a proper mixdown to get it mastered, I would like to get some feedback on the structure and sounds used; is it Label material?

https://soundcloud.com/stachesmusic/staches-lift-me-ft-nathan-brumley/s-bYygU


Any feedback will be truly appreciated  ;D
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Re: Feedback will be really appreciated with this ID
« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2016, 10:05:15 am »
Sounds pretty good. The lead sounds very airy. Try messing with the eqs. Same goes for the vocals. Sounds very airy, Idk how to explain it. Everything else sounds really good.
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Re: Feedback will be really appreciated with this ID
« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2016, 09:31:20 pm »
Thanks Peteryunsie!

I get what you're saying, that I should put some more treble in the vocals and the Leads, I'll try that for sure.  :)
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Re: Feedback will be really appreciated with this ID
« Reply #3 on: May 18, 2016, 10:45:44 pm »
I actually think the vocals take away from the music to be honest, but it still works and is a good song. The only thing that I noticed was your usage of that riser effect was a bit much. I would save it only for transitioning into a new section.
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