Nice mix on the intro, buildup was great but didn't really deliver much of anything (it's a taste thing with me, I'm personally not a fan of repetitive kicks). Also, your kicks seem to be a bit over bearing, even though they're not really loud they still seem to clip out the rest of the song. The track as a whole sounds pretty static, a little more mixing and balancing can go a long way.
Overall pretty good though, especially considering I'm not a fan of drum & bass or house. I've definitely heard worse, that's for sure. Keep at it.