Well, I could try and give you some decent advice. That's hard for me to do though.
Cons:
- The kick doesn't quite fit in. I'd say deeper (more presence in the lows) a little reverb (but not too much) and maybe a quiet sfx to make it stand out more.
- It could have used a proper ending. It's better than just having the song fade in my opinion, and it would have fit the mood.
- Even though your melody and chords are great, it started to get repetitive. Try changing some of the notes and chords at times during the song, even if it's just a couple, it'll keep the listener's attention.
- The percussion used for hats are a little too loud. Turning them down would accent the snare.
- The snare is too dry. It needs just a little reverb. In this case, the "tail" of the reverb would fade out before the next percussive instrument played.
Pros:
- I like you use of the steel drums; they're readily available but aren't used much in electronic music.
- The atmosphere also is very good.
- The melody and chords are really neat.
I'd listen to this song again. Well done.
-Annie
