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hillard

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"Morromannen" - Generic house-ish.
« on: January 06, 2016, 05:29:31 pm »
Yo dudes. I have a track I'm working on at the moment. Would really like some feedback on the structure and if you think the melody and the song as a whole is catchy. Which version works best?

There's two versions:
https://soundcloud.com/hillard-v/morromannen-v2/s-uUPDh (original)

https://soundcloud.com/hillard-v/morromannen-2/s-773Sx (this version has the hats coming in right at the drop and a "harmony" coming in the second bar of the drop)

Cheers :)
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Re: "Morromannen" - Generic house-ish.
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 04:33:56 pm »
Those hats feel likda necessary to the whole vibe, I would go for the second version, personally. Also, I feel like the melody is a little repetitive. Maybe change it for the second time around, or double its length? The structure works fine, though! (I think)
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