I love 0:54! The idea and the sound design are amazing, so maybe make it less glitchy to really make the most of its euphoric nature? I also love when the breakbeat sample comes in, it continues the vibe brilliantly and I think you should definitely incorporate it more in your drop to keep the up tempo vibe coming in every now and then, rather than the constant static half time vibe.
In terms of the mix, it sounds a little muddy to me. In particular the synth at 1:25 really highlights it for me. I'm not good at quoting frequencies, so I can't really help with more in depth EQ advice
