Author Topic: New Track :) could use some feedback for improvement (Read 3697 times)

iyan · « **on:** April 30, 2016, 11:30:53 am »

Hi guys, just made a track

producing for 1 and a half month. please let me know what you guys think. Need some feedback. for self improvement.

Thank you :)

climax708 · « **Reply #1 on:** April 30, 2016, 02:44:22 pm »

Hi! One and a half month you say?
For a beginner, you sound great! I remember how my music sounded when I just started. (Hint: Laughable.)

As for the negatives, a set of points:
0:07 - Bass is in unison with the lead. Makes it sound boring. Try harmonizing.
0:16 - Vocals are clipped. Is the distortion intentional?
Also, the bassline is doing it's own thing. Sounds like it shouldn't be there.
Try something else. Something that would compliment the singing.
1:01 - I like the buildup. Sounds like something epic is going to happen.
1:16 - ... what? Sounds half-assed. Spend more time on it, and it can be great.
Also, try bringing out the kick more. It's swallowed by all the rest. Tip: Use EQ to bring out the low frequencies.
1:47 - Piano is distorted.

Other than that, you're doing good!
Keep up the hard work.

slunk · « **Reply #2 on:** May 02, 2016, 10:52:26 pm »

Hey Iyan,

Cool track dude, for a month and a half I'm extremely impressed. Took me about a year before I finished my first track.

Sounds like you might have upped the gain a little too much when mastering, some parts of the track are a little distorted. Are you using much compression? What mastering techniques did you use? Have you looked a multi-band compression?

Peace,

Slunk

https://soundcloud.com/slunkuk

Author Topic: New Track :) could use some feedback for improvement (Read 3697 times)

iyan

New Track :) could use some feedback for improvement

climax708

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slunk

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