Heyo,
As Vidale say, dynamics are a bit small. Also everything seems to be very muffled. It's kinda not loud enough. try compression and Eq a bit more. (Cutting thing, like the lows in every instruments, except the bass might be a good idea.)
Also, It's missing some highs end on this. Might want to turn up a little bit the highs of you main synths.
This is nice still

babasmas.