The build-up from 1:00 is very interesting. But I think background sounds in the drop are killing the energy that you want to make.. In the drop I see harder bass line, some groovy synth.. I don't know how to name it.

Sounds messy. Sounds are all over the place, then theres this strange hoover or whatever playing the whole drop which is annoying. I dont get the idea aswell like as a listener i mean to what i should pay attention lol .Work on your EQ,lowcut everything but bass and kick .Choose synths that can flow with the track easily instead of just random bells or whatever that seem just thrown there and playing all over the place . GL

there's way too much going on in the drop. However, I do like that synth that's playing the melody, and what you have starting from 0:48 sounds interesting. Simplify the drop a bit with a catchier melody and you'll have something good!