I like the blips in the intro, maybe try to introduce them by opening up a slightly resonant high pass filter. I would change your kick to something with a sharper sounding transient, right now it sounds boxy and can be more punchy. The biggest issue with your track is that it lacks excitement going along. I want to hear more contrast between sections along with smoother transitions between parts. For instance, the strings or pad chords in the background can change (Both sonically and melodically) every once in a while to keep things fresh.