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looking for critique
« on: January 06, 2016, 02:16:36 am »
https://soundcloud.com/heartsmusic/mistbreak/s-DBmq0

This song is generally fleshed out but throughout the process of working on it I feel like there are a lot of things in composition, production, and overall energy that may be lacking and I'm just kinda looking for a general critique :)

PS to matt and rishi, great idea with starting a new forum! good luck! :D
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Re: looking for critique
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2016, 02:19:52 am »
Loving the intro/buildup. Only thing is that in the drop the bass synths don't hit as hard as I would've expected them to. Making them a bit louder and wider would probably help
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Re: looking for critique
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2016, 02:24:18 am »
Awesome intro, I really like how the percussion comes in! I think the transition at 1:15 could be a bit more smooth though, but overall good job:)
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Re: looking for critique
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2016, 02:26:35 am »
Really incredible ^^

All the ideia is really good man, remenber a lot of digitalism things w trance flavor :)

but i dont know if i hear for the first time, take a review on the structure of the music n make the drop kickin harder.
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Re: looking for critique
« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2016, 02:30:31 am »
haha yeah i think right now my edges are rough when it comes to transitions, often i either end up overdoing them or undermining them <.<
as for the drop I think I'm losing energy because I'm kinda pulling my rythmic pattern in two directions at once. I'm gonna go back and try to rework it with new sounds and refine what im trying to do with the rhythmic tension
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Re: looking for critique
« Reply #5 on: January 06, 2016, 03:14:29 am »
I'm wondering about how the energy and build up and through 4:00 sounds to people :)
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Re: looking for critique
« Reply #6 on: January 06, 2016, 03:22:36 am »
Imo the bass in the drop needs a lot more low mids and thickness in general, that said the track overall sounds awesome im especially digging the gliding synth in the last part of the drop :)
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Re: looking for critique
« Reply #7 on: January 06, 2016, 04:14:40 am »
very pretty intro.  these drums are very hard hitting which i enjoy.  but i do feel like there could be a tad more going on with the bass in the drop.  maybe try implementing some fx? overall very solid track!
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