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AnnieTP - Experiment_5 (Looking for criticism)
« on: April 22, 2016, 10:36:13 pm »
Hi.

I'm looking for a few opinions on this song I just finished. Tell me anything you don't like about the song, and how I could fix it.

It's a minimal(ish?) song. I'm not entirely sure how the highs turned out.

Anyways, thanks for the feedback.

-Annie



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Re: AnnieTP - Experiment_5 (Looking for criticism)
« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2016, 05:40:53 pm »
Thanks for the remarks. =3
I have already started work on my next song, and it's somewhat similar. I will keep in mind what you have said when I make it.

-Annie

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Re: AnnieTP - Experiment_5 (Looking for criticism)
« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2016, 04:53:52 pm »
I browsed over it, and i noticed there wasn't a whole lot of song sectioning.

May not want to stick to the whole multiples of 4 bar sort of thing, but it does help if you can differentiate your ideas enough.

Lot of repetition, in a not so good way (as in a recurring theme).

Mixing sounds pretty ok, that lead sticks out like a sore thumb, but overall it's alright.


Kinda video game esque
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Re: AnnieTP - Experiment_5 (Looking for criticism)
« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2016, 11:33:01 pm »
Funny, I thought there was enough contrast (if that's what you mean.)

I agree with you on the x4, repetition, and mixing points though.

Does it remind you of any particular video game?

Thanks for the feedback. It helps me very much.

-Annie

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Re: AnnieTP - Experiment_5 (Looking for criticism)
« Reply #4 on: April 25, 2016, 03:29:15 am »
Hey Annie,

Nice vibes!  8) Have to agree with eidolon about the silence at the beginning but music is subjective remember. Some people like an emotional build up!

Peace,

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Re: AnnieTP - Experiment_5 (Looking for criticism)
« Reply #5 on: April 26, 2016, 07:37:05 pm »
Noted, thanks for the feedback.

Also, I don't mean to be that guy, but do you know how to edit your signature?

-Annie