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Leaves by Hock.
« on: April 22, 2016, 04:46:11 am »
Hey guys, I would really appreciate some feedback on this track I made. I've been working on it for a really long time and I put a lot of emotion and effort behind it. Please tell me what you think and how you would improve it! Thank you!!

https://soundcloud.com/noahocker/leaves
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Re: Leaves by Hock.
« Reply #1 on: May 11, 2016, 07:08:57 pm »
It's good. You have a melody that held the song together, and you built on it well. I didn't have any problems with the composition, but there are some things I'd like to point out regarding the mixing.
- The tonal hits in the beginning had too much reverb.
- The hats are too loud. When that happens, it distracts from the kick/snare beat. Nothing a volume slider can't fix.
- The snare doesn't fit the song. It's too dry. A different snare or adding reverb would easily fix the problem.

Well done. I liked it.

-Annie
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Re: Leaves by Hock.
« Reply #2 on: May 11, 2016, 08:05:17 pm »
Loving the track dude. How did you get the piano to sound so fat? Loving the vocal melodies over the top and the dark feel from the other instruments in the background. Don't have any criticisms to be honest, sounds pretty darn professional - good job!
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