Basicly, I'm not a big fan of pithing these commonly known vocals but in case of drop this key works very good

At first drop maybe try to filter/add some higher freq to the main saws (?) bc for me at first time it gives me the impression that the whole mix is moody. I think the energy is good, but maybe try to add 2x kick in the second part of every drop, you know, like in original

That's my opinion. Nice work for me, greetings !