For Jastun - Down:

It needs a lot of work. The intro leads could use more "movement": sounds like they're just straight sounds. Their sounds don't change at all, so it just sounds flat. More flat than necessary.
- The snares and claps are too loud.
- The open hat sounds...not so good. It's much too loud, and seems to be affected in some -way...maybe a poor filter or distortion. I'm not sure.
- The arp that enters at 2:35 is repetitive and slightly out of tune. Annoying.
- Is there a melody or hook that holds the song together? It could use one.
- Maybe the snares could use a little reverb.

For Jastun - T.U.N.K.:

This one is a little better. The kick is took clicky, and a little too quiet though.
- Claps are too loud again.
- Again, feels like it's missing a proper main melody.
- The lead that appears at 2:01 sounds out of key, and it's annoying because the rhythm it's given is repetitive and clumsy. And it's too loud. It sticks out.
- The ending could be a little better...as in, more finished. Maybe it could be more melodic. Your melodies are very "vague". They don't create an impression.

So, in summary, you need to work on your mixing, sound design, arrangment, and composition. And if the feedback sounded like a roast, don't worry... I probably need to work on my mixing, sound design, arrangment, and composition, more than you do.

-Annie