Author Topic: "Burst a Vain" - ade1980 (prod. by Steph S) | Hip-Hop/Rap  (Read 4765 times)

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"Burst a Vain" - ade1980 (prod. by Steph S) | Hip-Hop/Rap
« on: January 06, 2016, 04:09:19 pm »
y'all can give feedback if you want. or not. idc
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Re: "Burst a Vain" - ade1980 (prod. by Steph S) | Hip-Hop/Rap
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2016, 05:33:54 pm »
this sounds awesome! did you sample anything from another song?


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Re: "Burst a Vain" - ade1980 (prod. by Steph S) | Hip-Hop/Rap
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2016, 05:53:51 pm »
This. Is. SICK. I love the drums. As Petitjos said, where abouts did you sample them from? I need them in my life.

The reverby/surreal piano thing in the intro feels a little bit grainy. I'd tone it down a little and push it a bit further back in the mix. The sub bass during the rap feels a little overpowering as well. Overall, with this style, it feels you should just not push everything through so heavy. It has an awesome laid back and chilled feel and I think you should emanate that in your mix
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