You've captured the style very well. I like it. A note:
- The kick needed some work. Starting at 0:39, the kick really stuck out. I don't think the kick you used suits the style. It should sound "deeper", as in, a little more going for it in the bass area (ex:
Direct - Tranquility starting at 0:54. I couldn't find a more relevant example) like that. Then in the second drop (I'm just going to call it that) I was straining to hear the kick at all.
Roughly speaking, well done thus far. Nothing jumped out at me in a bad way except for the kick.
-Annie