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carlitoNthecokefactory

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my first remix w.i.p
« on: April 19, 2016, 03:10:45 pm »
hi everyone. this is my first remix. I took Justin Beiber's 'Sorry' and tried some stuff. I'd like some feed back, and I'll be posting feedback after lunch.

thanks  :)

https://clyp.it/dlgsyf3b

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Re: my first remix w.i.p
« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2016, 11:13:45 am »
Well, for your first remix, it's not bad. The two main issues right now are your mix and your transitions. Without getting into specifics, your mix could use a little fixing, but I'll let it go since this is still a WIP, and you may or may not have done any mixing up to this point.
Your transitions could be smoother. The dubstep parts and the chillout parts are very different, and you're trying to glue them together with sweeps, or nothing. They almost feel like separate entities.
Also, I am not entirely sure about your ending. You will change that, right?

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Re: my first remix w.i.p
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2016, 05:46:08 pm »
thank you so much for your feedback. i did light mixing just for effects on the vocals. i feel you on the transitioning. i can't seem to figure out how to transition between the chill parts and dubsteppy part. the ending was just left over stuff in arrangement view that i didn't get to. i like to work my way from left to right, so i kinda just piled different elements to the right side of the track. i changed a few things since then, like aligning the vocals on the verse after the first drop. i'll be sure to post the end result when i reach it. thanks again for your reply, it means a lot to me ;D

oh and the sweep was a placement holder until i figure out what i want. hopefully, ill figure it out soon lol