Author Topic: Futurechill/Rnb/Hiphop/Vibes. (Read 6098 times)

kimsummer · « **on:** April 19, 2016, 10:20:18 am »

I'm working in progress with this track..

How do you think, so far...?

AnnieTP · « **Reply #1 on:** April 19, 2016, 12:32:46 pm »

Nice cover art.

Cons:

- The sweep at 0:12 does not fit in volume-wise and does not smoothly connect the first part of the intro with the second.
- The buildup claps that come in at 0:20 overpower the other elements.
- Your melody is good, but too repetitive. I only hear those three (three? four?) notes coming out of the melody.

Pros:

- I like the blend of ambient and sharp elements that you created. You have a good mood going in the song.
- Good use of contrast between the breaks and the drops.

Overall, good song. I know most of the problems were about the mix. However, even if you haven't started mixing yet, those are some thoughts for you to keep in mind going into the mixing phase when it comes.

Lastly: I'm not a very experienced musician, so if anyone else gives you feedback on this song that contradicts what I've said here, it's very likely that they're right and I'm not.
Good luck finishing. Hopefully you get a second opinion on this.

-Annie

carlitoNthecokefactory · « **Reply #2 on:** April 19, 2016, 03:49:36 pm »

I dig this track a lot but I feel like the high end keeps fighting each other, especially the reverb tails. Also, I personally want more of that synth/choppy thing after the sweep/drop because that sounds dope af!

kimsummer · « **Reply #3 on:** April 20, 2016, 02:59:13 am »

Quote from: carlitoNthecokefactory on April 19, 2016, 03:49:36 pm

I dig this track a lot but I feel like the high end keeps fighting each other, especially the reverb tails. Also, I personally want more of that synth/choppy thing after the sweep/drop because that sounds dope af!

Thanks..

I stopped that synth/choppy part You mentioned . I think this part is hardest.
Synth is always problem,, I guess

btw what's mean the high-end keeps fighting..? what part did you mean..? (If you see this comment , again..

)

Anyways, Thank you so much for you comment

Have a great day, there !

kimsummer · « **Reply #4 on:** April 20, 2016, 03:19:36 am »

Quote from: AnnieTP on April 19, 2016, 12:32:46 pm

Nice cover art.

Cons:

- The sweep at 0:12 does not fit in volume-wise and does not smoothly connect the first part of the intro with the second.
- The buildup claps that come in at 0:20 overpower the other elements.
- Your melody is good, but too repetitive. I only hear those three (three? four?) notes coming out of the melody.

Pros:

- I like the blend of ambient and sharp elements that you created. You have a good mood going in the song.
- Good use of contrast between the breaks and the drops.

Overall, good song. I know most of the problems were about the mix. However, even if you haven't started mixing yet, those are some thoughts for you to keep in mind going into the mixing phase when it comes.

Lastly: I'm not a very experienced musician, so if anyone else gives you feedback on this song that contradicts what I've said here, it's very likely that they're right and I'm not.
Good luck finishing. Hopefully you get a second opinion on this.

-Annie

I agree that what you talked.
I couldn't do mix carefully on this track, actually.
You were talking accurately.

Thanks for your definite comment. It's helpful.
Have a great day, Annie

kimsummer · « **Reply #5 on:** April 20, 2016, 03:21:44 am »

This is the latest one i'm working in progress.

Author Topic: Futurechill/Rnb/Hiphop/Vibes. (Read 6098 times)

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