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"Your Hands" any kind feedback is welcome
« on: April 19, 2016, 04:21:19 am »
Hey Guys,

I've been working on this track for a while and I'd like you to listen to it and tell me whatever comes to your mind. Any kind of feedback is welcome, either you want to say something about the arrangement, mixing, or anything else please do.

Keep in mind it is an extended mix, so the track itself starts at 0:31.

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Re: "Your Hands" any kind feedback is welcome
« Reply #1 on: April 19, 2016, 01:42:26 pm »
It's an extended mix? Oh, interesting.

Cons:

- The vocal chops get somewhat annoying after a while. Either try more variation, or remove some bits.
- I was expecting a drop after the buildup at 1:19. All right, I can wait.
- The drop (when it finally comes) is a little weak. After that prolonged buildup, the drop that followed was a bit of a let down. Thankfully it wasn't bad.

Pros:

- You have a smooth chord progression in the song.
- Also there is smooth arrangement.

Good job on it overall so far.

Lastly: I'm not a very experienced musician, so if anyone else gives you feedback on this song that contradicts what I've said here, it's very likely that they're right and I'm not.

-Annie

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Re: "Your Hands" any kind feedback is welcome
« Reply #2 on: April 19, 2016, 02:25:43 pm »
Thanks Annie, that helps a lot. I'll see what I can do after the second drop and figure out a better arrangement so that the vocals are not so repetitive.

Thanks for your pointers.

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Re: "Your Hands" any kind feedback is welcome
« Reply #3 on: April 19, 2016, 03:10:09 pm »
Yeah the drop is weak, as a listener i couldnt choose to which part should i pay attention cuz it seems like all the elements are fighting . It needs a proper mixdown and sound selection . Its not even about the repetition its more likely about having some sort of a distinctive hook that makes the listener come back to the track . Hopefully u understand lol .

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« Reply #4 on: April 19, 2016, 04:02:55 pm »
Yeah the drop is weak, as a listener i couldnt choose to which part should i pay attention cuz it seems like all the elements are fighting . It needs a proper mixdown and sound selection . Its not even about the repetition its more likely about having some sort of a distinctive hook that makes the listener come back to the track . Hopefully u understand lol .

I see. On the drop I want people to focus on the bass, I'll fix it in the mix. I'll see wha I can do to make the drop stronger.

Thank you.