Author Topic: Confesiones! New Track  (Read 3340 times)

Sebas Ramos

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Confesiones! New Track
« on: April 19, 2016, 03:01:40 am »
Hi guys! this is a really unique project I´ve been working on and it has a cool story, back in February I decided to make a track for a boy which dreams to become a big rapper it´s name was Saulo, and he doesn´t have money to buy instruments for his dream, I did the beats, melody, harmony and when it was time to put Saulo´s voice I noticed that he lacks a pair of things and I prefer him to practice and gain his achievements by himself rather than me editing his whole voice, so after that I really wanted this to become a collab with a rapper but it didn´t worked, so I decided to give you this guys because it´s a really great project which involves a lot of feelings, althoug I´m planning Saulo to sing on this one! if destiny wants maybe I will do a vocal mix with him, but for now I´m giving you this! Many bad things have happened in my country which has hurted a lot of people, and also there are other bad people which still hurts the other, I think it is time for us to confess with the others and also with our planet, because it´s healthier for everybody. Did you know that meanwhile your sitting in front of your computer, bad things occur, from the minimum like irrespect to the maximum which involves killing! so I really encourage to listen to this song and confess with you and everything around yourself, the world need us, let´s make it better together!

https://soundcloud.com/lettaaa/confesiones

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Re: Confesiones! New Track
« Reply #1 on: May 11, 2016, 11:17:40 am »
Interesting backstory. I think you may have meant to spell "confessions" though.

For the most part composition if fine; I know you planned on introducing rap vocals to the song, but in the mean time this song is almost 6 minutes long and does get monotonous. There's not much song sectioning (I singled out 2, maybe 3, parts), which contributes to it greatly. You can keep it fresh just by adding some contrast instead of one long stretch and an ending. Mixing is fine here, but the hats should be a little quieter. Decent song overall.

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