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Rakielis

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128 trance housey
« on: April 19, 2016, 12:49:14 am »
Hello!  I'm new here, but been producing on my own for a few years now.  I've heard (and feel) that my composition is ahead of my sound design.  So I guess, if you have thoughts on sound design (or sound selection in the case of samples) - please share them.  I'd be open to any feedback for sure, just saying where I feel the most weakness.

https://soundcloud.com/ha11ey/lander-21

Hope you enjoy it.  I was inspired by modern Anjuna, but also the Interstellar theme (stay).

edit: i did a lot of tweaking!  pretty much every section has changed slightly

https://soundcloud.com/ha11ey/lander-22/s-HBOI2

edit 2: fixed link, did more to first build up
« Last Edit: April 24, 2016, 08:23:53 pm by Rakielis »
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Re: 128 trance housey
« Reply #1 on: April 19, 2016, 05:58:57 pm »
Hey man! Another trance producer here. Love this work! Very creative and I love the style. It'd be nice to have the bass line at 2:55 by more dynamic. Maybe switch between different bass synths and beat repeats to get more energy, it feels a bit repetitive. Also, maybe tweak the levels to get the mix a bit more balanced. The bass seems to stick out a little more than necessary and the synths have a bit more on the lower end than the higher. That's just my preference though. Love it though!
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Re: 128 trance housey
« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2016, 02:48:15 am »
Glad you liked it :D I worked on the bass to give it a little bit more movement.  I used to have 3 synths all doing the same thing... now I've split it up, so they play with out 1 or 2 of the synths a lot of the time.  To me, it feels like it moves more.  Also did a bunch of other stuff so check it out :3
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Re: 128 trance housey
« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2016, 07:21:45 pm »
Hmmm.... its cool man, the drop section its good some variations, good melody, good intro, maybe you need to improve more the structure of all entire song, just details, but i see somthing like "soundprank" here, just work dude, just do it, its a big song here ^^
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Re: 128 trance housey
« Reply #4 on: April 24, 2016, 08:23:29 pm »
Thanks for the thoughts Artic.  I do definitely enjoy Soundprank's work.  I've started (but not finished) his recent mixing tutorial on sonic academy.

I spent all morning working on the first build up.  I feel I could still improve (or rather, create) drum rolls to link sections together.  My attempts thus far have not been pleasing to listen to.

https://soundcloud.com/ha11ey/lander-22/s-HBOI2

Too much?
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