It sounds good. Let me see...

Cons:

- The "asian" (what should I actually call it) pad that comes in at 0:37 is too loud.
- To make the kick stick out more you probably should have given a little bit of high end.

Pros:

- It really does sound dark.

Oh, and just know I'm not a very experienced musician, so if anyone else gives you feedback on this song that contradicts what I've said here, it's very likely that they're right and I'm not.

-Annie