Well, hi. Doesn't look like you've been very active since you posted this, so I'll just drop this here in case you come back.
Cons:
- There were different sections, but little contrast between them. So a listener may end up confusing the song as one long part if he wasn't paying attention.
- The kick gets a little bit buried under everything that plays during the drop.
- I don't think you had priorities while mixing. During the drop, everything is playing at once with no sense of direction. The piano, the lead, the vocals, the drums, and the bass are all playing at generally the same volume, and sometimes overlapping. They're all fighting for the spotlight, but nothing is accomplished.
Pros:
- I am definitely getting summer party vibes from this...
-Annie