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Airpotato (House)
« on: April 17, 2016, 09:57:35 am »
One potato, two tomato, airpotato, four...


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Re: Airpotato (House)
« Reply #1 on: April 17, 2016, 10:39:55 pm »
I like my potatoes mashed hoohoo
Well, you didn't ask for any feedback in particular, so here goes?

Cons:

- I think the lead that comes in at 2:30 could use a bit more presence in the bass area. It would be alright if you left it, I suppose, but as is I think it lacks power.
- The kick also is lacking a little in in the lows, but it could be because the bass and leads are somewhat overwhelming to it.
- Do you have any sub bass in the song at all? I feel like the song in general is missing a sub, but it could be just me. However, the drop is in need of some added power in the sub area, I think, more than the rest of the song.
- Consider an ending? It doesn't have to be long, but the end was somewhat abrupt.

Pros:

- Good job keeping the long intro interesting.
- The breakdown after the drop was also well made, especially the transition from the break into the drop.

Overall, good job on the song so far! At first I was expecting a long, steady, uninterrupted minimal kind of house, but I was pleasantly surprised. Nice work.

One last thing: I'm not a very experienced musician, so if anyone else gives you feedback on this song that contradicts what I've said here, it's very likely that they're right and I'm not.

-Annie