I really liked the intro, it sounds like Fox Stevenson“s Sweets which is cool. I also felt that one vocal was out of key, still they have a good reverb, the kick needs to be a more punchier and gain volume into the mix, a sidechain technique is the right thing to do and maybe a mastering so it sounds better?
I find a track with good ideas and potential but you need to develop them and learn more. Well done dude keep on working!
(Didnt know Ephixa was around here! Feel lucky that one of the best dubstep producers gave you feedback
Cheers!