Hopefully you can get another opinion on this. It has plenty of potential!

Cons:

- It's kind of early in the process to find any problems. Since the clip is so short, all I can say is good job so far. I could see it turning into a powerful drop/climax, or whatever suits you.

Pros:

- For not being mastered (mixed?) it sounds really good! Mixing shouldn't be much of a problem.
- Good use of variety and repetition in your melodies.
- You have a really good, calm atmosphere going in your song, especially the intro.

-Annie