This is pretty good as is man.

2.23 it needs to end, the stuff that's extra is not needed.

I will also suggest, you literally allow 1 or two bars of silence between transitions of sections.

If you decide to not put more silence, i'd suggest you end it at 2.23 or where that last clap/hi hat hit is.

But if you want to throw in some silence, it should give it the breathing room and allow for more effect tails to resolve. And it'll add another level of dynamics to the track.

But it flows well, just gotta be confident on your ending.

I really like this track.
I'd say at some point around 1:35, drop the percussion and put in something flowing and melodic.
Maybe piano? I feel like it holds together well, but could use a more defined theme, which you could
implement effectively by adding a non-chopped or bent section. Just to remind listeners what they're
listening to. Otherwise it's fantastic.

~NewPatrol