I'll try to give some constructive criticism. I hope someone else will give their thoughts on this song though.

Cons:

- The vocal chops stick out a little too much, although it's not too far off the mark. Volume needs to drop here.
- The piano was terrific! I think it should have gotten a little more attention. The ending was somewhat abrupt; I would have ended with the piano instrumental.
- The kick should have been louder.

Pros:

- I like the second drop and how it differs from the first.
- I enjoyed the atmosphere you created in the intro and sustained throughout the song.

Overall, very good job on your song.

-Annie