I listened. You may want to change that title as that kind of title could turn some people off.
Cons:
- The piano sounds very odd. I could describe with "saturated", maybe. It could possibly be compression.
- The bass does not like my speakers. I think it may have been distorted too much. A low pass filter could probably fix that.
- The song sounds "unattractive", or another word would be, "low quality sound", maybe.
- The "drop" (I'll just call it that) sounds messy, as in, there's too much sounds all playing at once, all fighting for the spotlight. Mixing needs work.
Pros:
- The song has a catchy melody.
- If you replaced the bass with some kind of neuro bass and applied band pass automation, you could probably pull off a neat glitch hop VIP.
Overall, sweet tune. The mixing alone would be enough for someone else to disagree, however.
-Annie