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Sweet Wave Racer project
« on: April 09, 2016, 05:56:29 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/perylian/xerneas-future-bass-version-demo/s-BgCa7

Hello ! Would love to get your Feedback on this track inspired by Pokemon and Wave Racer and his beautiful melodies. This is still drumless, will put them later.
Cheers and enjoy ! :D
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Re: Sweet Wave Racer project
« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2016, 12:05:21 pm »
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Re: Sweet Wave Racer project
« Reply #2 on: April 11, 2016, 04:35:07 pm »
hi, it's quite hard to give feedback w/out drums so this might be terrible advice but then again it could help... I think the track could benefit from more attention to the mix, especially in the first verse, as there is a lot going on and it becomes quite hard to follow the main part.

also, although the drums will definitely play a large part in this, it might be a good idea to give the track more of a rhythmic pulse/groove; as this, for me at least, is one of the things wave racer really does well.

hope this is of some use and hmu if you need any elaboration on the tips!  ;D