ripped from the intro of my actual project  ... hope u give it a listen and tell me what you think about it 
private link : https://soundcloud.com/nasseragil/nbm-241/s-yBtvQ

Hey, the sounds and the drums you choosed are pretty good to start with, i would recommend to put some more arpeggios or wobbles effects at 0:33
And after you finished to compose your Intro, you'll need to mix the track (maybe with less White Noise) and also don't forget your mixdown to see if everything is at a good level.
Cheers

Hey, the sounds and the drums you choosed are pretty good to start with, i would recommend to put some more arpeggios or wobbles effects at 0:33
And after you finished to compose your Intro, you'll need to mix the track (maybe with less White Noise) and also don't forget your mixdown to see if everything is at a good level.
Cheers

thank u for listening man !! i'll see what i can do about it 

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thnx man for listening and for the motivation ... i had just listened to your remix and i liked it , it gave me a big inspiration to keep working on my project thank u again

Awesome, glad I can inspire and motivate you! I'm curious DAW do you use?

FL studio