ah man, the chorus is really cool, but I kinda felt like it didn't hit that climax as well as it could have. It sorta built up and then happened with no real *POW* that I so want from hard tempo stuff. Maybe build it up a little more (with LFP and stuff) so that the drop is more unique compared to the build up, or maybe a 1-2 bar gap to make it more forceful? I dunno, just some ideas.