Author Topic: Sprout – Trip [Terrorhythm]  (Read 3711 times)

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Sprout – Trip [Terrorhythm]
« on: April 06, 2016, 01:37:48 am »
This AWE-style tune of mine went up on SC a month or so and it never managed to garner any attention. Whatcha guys think of it?

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Re: Sprout – Trip [Terrorhythm]
« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2016, 03:42:45 pm »
I like the second half of the song a lot more than the first half. Honestly, the down arpeggio works as just the intro for the first 10 secs, but it just doesn't sound good from that point. as a melody, it's just uncreative it doesn't create much for the listener to enjoy. I like the chords plenty, and maybe you should have expanded on that idea more from the beginning. Another problem if you're looking for more listeners..the song is only 1:16. That's not long enough to actually track anyone wanting to listen to something.