I kinda wanted to hear a fizzy saw lead with a bit of reverb/delay over your intro. The drop kinda took me by surprise and it was a real cool transition, but maybe filter your sounds besides the bass to get a really nice contrast through a bit of that section. When the super saw chords come in maybe add some more ambience around it, make it sort of float in a dreamy/ethereal sort of way. I love the idea man, cool stuff!