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ErikF

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Seven Lions Dubstep-y Thing
« on: March 31, 2016, 04:32:35 am »
https://soundcloud.com/erikf-2/sl-bass-2

Just made this today. What do ya think?
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Re: Seven Lions Dubstep-y Thing
« Reply #1 on: March 31, 2016, 08:02:05 am »
Good start. Feels empty though. The bass sound is also too bland. Using a white noise with it and some light distortion would help. Also sounds like its 1 or 2 wavetables going. Try using more and doing more with layering? It's got a solid start.
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Re: Seven Lions Dubstep-y Thing
« Reply #2 on: March 31, 2016, 10:15:11 pm »
not to bad, i'd raise your instruments up a bit. to compensate for that increase in volume you might have to lower the drums a tad.

but it's good that you have the bias towards the drums a bit.

the 30second mark or so should be how you begin the song, rather than the stuff before that mark.
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