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Hatsune Miku (future bass remix thing)
« on: March 30, 2016, 06:23:06 pm »
Hey guys ive just been messing around with the some vocaloid vocals and came up with something that I am starting to like a lot.

Would love to know what you guys think!

https://soundcloud.com/excited-nonetheless/hatsune/s-KxQ22
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Re: Hatsune Miku (future bass remix thing)
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2016, 01:03:37 pm »
yo, good job on the vocaloid, the singing fits well with the instrumental which is also pretty neat!

The main criticism I can think of is arrangement related and is that imo the chorus/drop could hit a little harder so there is more of a payoff after the build, you could make the build quieter or the drop louder; for the latter a louder bass/ larger chords/some more layers on the percussion could help with this.

thats the only thing that really stood out, sweet track!

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Re: Hatsune Miku (future bass remix thing)
« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2016, 01:11:48 pm »
Good work on fitting in the vocals! pretty cool moving effects on the chords as well.

have to agree with endlesstea on the part where the drop doesn´t have the extra impact it needs, if you sort that out i think it will end up being a great piece!

might be that it´s because the fact that soundcloud doesn´t bang out 320kbps quality, but i feel like you could make those arpeggios a bit more present, they kinda drown in the build-up. and make those beautiful percussions you have under there shine a bit more, have you tried compressing them?

keep it up! looking forward to hear the finished result!:)