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Vera - Gold || Opinions wanted :D
« on: March 28, 2016, 08:55:38 am »
Made a new track and fixed up on all the criticism I got on my last song.
Fun track with an EDM / DnB feel. Let me know what you guys think <3


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Re: Vera - Gold || Opinions wanted :D
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2016, 09:27:35 pm »
This track is muddy, the frequencies are fighting with eachother so EQ the Kick and Bass so they compliment eachother,the claps are getting lost when everything is playing try adding sample delay to make them sound wider

Instrumentation wise I would think about taking some things away as it is all abit too busy work on mixing your drums because they carry a track.

Try sticking to one genre when making a track because an EDM track can't possibly sound like a Dnb track

Hope this helps

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Re: Vera - Gold || Opinions wanted :D
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2016, 08:27:36 pm »
sounds like you have everything super loud with a brick wall limiter on top. try and play with the volume of each part to give everything its own space so they aren't fighting for room.

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Re: Vera - Gold || Opinions wanted :D
« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2016, 08:29:29 pm »
Yeah that is true. It felt hard to have the amount of channels I did without messing that up.. I think it might be a good idea to pan things in order to give it all a bit of breathing room.

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Re: Vera - Gold || Opinions wanted :D
« Reply #4 on: March 30, 2016, 08:30:17 pm »
sounds like you have everything super loud with a brick wall limiter on top. try and play with the volume of each part to give everything its own space so they aren't fighting for room.


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Re: Vera - Gold || Opinions wanted :D
« Reply #5 on: March 30, 2016, 08:31:57 pm »
This track is muddy, the frequencies are fighting with eachother so EQ the Kick and Bass so they compliment eachother,the claps are getting lost when everything is playing try adding sample delay to make them sound wider

Instrumentation wise I would think about taking some things away as it is all abit too busy work on mixing your drums because they carry a track.

Try sticking to one genre when making a track because an EDM track can't possibly sound like a Dnb track

Hope this helps

https://soundcloud.com/articulatebacklash/emulate


woah you just followed me on SoundCloud the other day! i just happened to click on your link and i knew i recognized that name somewhere. cool to see your on the fourms, thanks for the follow :)