Fun idea!

- At 0:33 there's a wrong note in the melody, it goes c#-d-b-f#, the original goes c#-d-c#-f#.
- In the buildup, the vocal synth sounds great.
- In the Goodbye part, the chord progression doesn't really fit. The original is in F# minor and your version is in D major, so for example the G in the bass is really dissonant with the melody g#-a-b

Fun idea!

- At 0:33 there's a wrong note in the melody, it goes c#-d-b-f#, the original goes c#-d-c#-f#.
- In the buildup, the vocal synth sounds great.
- In the Goodbye part, the chord progression doesn't really fit. The original is in F# minor and your version is in D major, so for example the G in the bass is really dissonant with the melody g#-a-b

Thank you for the feedback! The vocal synth is actually the exact same synth as the opening one. Im glad it ended up sounding like that ! Also I was curious as to what you said about the Goodbye part, and after looking at my midi again, the melody goes G-C#-D. So the root note of the melody is harmonic with the bass playing under it. However as far as the Divinity melody (and all melodies in the track), I'm definitely planning on adding some edits of my own, simply because I've heard loads of Porter remixes/remakes where the melodies are all the same as in his tracks, and while that still sounds amazing, i think it adds a certain level of predictability. Maybe im wrong lol