I think track is good, If i were you , I would propably try to send this track to labels to see if someone want's to release it. What might be the biggest minus in this track is main melody...I mean the track sound's great because of it's mixdown/effects/everything , but there is no such awesome main melody which would stuck in my head for a long time. I think that great melody that people would remember/recognize after listetning to it , it's way important than other elements. I think you should focus on that because mixdown and other elements you mastered really well already

I've spent so much time in becoming a good producer that I haven't really taken the time to think about how I should market my music.

Thanks for the comments as well guys, I'll take them into account also.

2-3 years, why?

inb4 others say this sounds somewhat reminiscent of old Unlike Pluto. The 2nd breakdown could use a change-up I think. That's just personal taste.