Author Topic: Automata Fox - Dance Queen | Bass House Track (Feedback needed!)  (Read 4946 times)

Automata Fox

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Hi,

We're Automata Fox.
We're producing for several months already and now our first bass house track is finally finished,
but we need some feedback from more experienced producers who can help us approve our future tracks.



Greetings
Automata Fox
(2 Belgian boys)

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Re: Automata Fox - Dance Queen | Bass House Track (Feedback needed!)
« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2016, 02:27:59 pm »
First of all , the track is really short (2:54) and for one minute there nothing happens (only drums?).
I'ts great that you experiment with vocal chops , but i think you should at least try to put some stabs, plucks or leads (I know it's is bass track , but it doesn't means you can't put any lead/pluck sound there). Also only 4-5 tracks for drums , 1 track for vocal , 1 track for bass and 1 for fx is not enought to make a good track(at least in this situation)...
Also the bass honestly does not fit into this track. I feel like it hurts my ears. It's not even about the sound of this bass , but the melody which is played by this bass and how it was placed in track. All I can advice you , just take the track you like from internet and try to reconstruct it on your DAW. You'll learn about arrangement and other stuff.
If you want to collaborate , just send me a PM :P

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Re: Automata Fox - Dance Queen | Bass House Track (Feedback needed!)
« Reply #2 on: March 26, 2016, 04:49:01 pm »
Contrary to what our boy Przemoemo has to say, I actually like the track. I think the drums are done
very tastefully except potentially the kick at 1:20 which sounds ever-so-slightly out of tune. I would
however, throw in a little more high in. Maybe some pads or an arp? Just a suggestion :) good work,
you seem far more advanced than your follower level, so I'm following you.

~NewPatrol

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Re: Automata Fox - Dance Queen | Bass House Track (Feedback needed!)
« Reply #3 on: March 26, 2016, 07:18:37 pm »
Thanks both of you guys,
I'll certainly will keep it in mind for my next tracks & thanks for following me! :)

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Re: Automata Fox - Dance Queen | Bass House Track (Feedback needed!)
« Reply #4 on: March 28, 2016, 12:13:17 am »
I like the song and the rhythm especially, its good for the experience you and your friend have. I would look over your baseline and change it up, by itself its not so bad but it becomes a little tiring. Also try introducing your track with some synth plucks or stabs, its good but feels like it need needs that extra rhythmic/melodic element to feel complete. Keep up the good work

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Re: Automata Fox - Dance Queen | Bass House Track (Feedback needed!)
« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2016, 09:47:09 am »
Thanks for the feedback! :)