I like the backing instruments. I think that the voice sounds too faint, or as if it was in the background? Add some more high frequencies and bring it towards the front. I think if you make it the center of the piece you can keep the energy going with the dynamics of the voice!

Something completely different!

- When the vocals kick in, I like the groove and overall sound, but there's something really dissonant in the background. I think a part of it is that ambulance(?) drone thingy, but also the piano has the sustain pedal left on which probably contributes! Actually I kind of like the ambulancey thing, it's probably not that.
- Kick could be more powerful
- Vocals definitely should be louder and have more high end
- After this buildup the track really has to blow up Needs a huge wall of sound.
- Is there some heavy compression in the master? The mix sounds very "wobbly" and low-quality because of that, especially after 0:44.

The strings are loud, and it's a little messy. I like it musically tho!

Thanks for the feedback, love your work! I know it's messy, I've been trying to clean it up, but unfortunately I
don't have a clean acapella, so everything does sound a little distant and muddy. Going to put most of my work
into fixing that

- After this buildup the track really has to blow up Needs a huge wall of sound.

Thanks for the feedback I'll get right on that wall of sound haha
Same as before though, thanks for the comments on the mix, I'll try and capitalize on what you suggested and
clean it up a little.

~NewPatrol